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Thursday, March 10, 2011 @ 1:06 AM

My username's ll0vex3_her
But you can always call me Young Ji ^^

Title: /10

-Does it catches the reader's attention?

-Does it have a connection to the story?

Foreword/Description: /10

-Is it clear and understandable?

-Right to the point and grips the readers to continue reading?
-Messy hard to understand or tidy and make sense?
-Connected to the story?

Plot: /25

-Interesting

-Goes with the plot, meaning not jumping from scenes to scenes, that will be confusing

-Original and unique or normal?

Writing: /10

-is clear and easy to understand

-has something to do with the plot.

Spelling/grammar: /25

-correct spelling

-correct terms and past tense/present tense

-correct grammar and punctuations

Flow - /10
-is it messy?
-does it skip scenes?

Overall Enjoyment - /10
How I like your story ^^

Total: /100

Reviewer's Note: This is how I grade ^^ Although at first, my rubic wasn't really...fair at all. So I decided to have a change here and there, and the marks are lower this time, lols. Anyway, hope you have a nice day ^^

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