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Hi Everyone~ o(^▽^)o (supshaz's introduction post)

Friday, August 12, 2011 @ 6:32 AM

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Hey Everyone! o(^▽^)o

This is supshaz! Or you can call me shazzy~:D I'm a new reviewer here at LS and I hope to give my best to everyone! I'm not a harsh reviewer at all (hell no~XD), but I can be real strict if you want me to be. I try to correct every mistakes I can find, and try my best to give a long, detailed review to people who requests~:D So please give me a lot of support ne? *do puppy eyes*

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~~~~~~☺Grades☺~~~~~~

☆E- 40% below- You want my honest opinion? Your fic is crap. Were you even paying attention of what you were doing?>< (Don't worry, I doubt I would actually give anyone that grade.XD)

☆D - 40%-54%- Lots of room for improvements to be honest. The story lacks several aspects and I didn't really enjoy reading it.:(

☆C- 55%-69%- It's good. But some area is still lacking. Try reading over your story and fix some mistakes that would make the story flow even better.

☆B- 70%-84%-Your story is fab! I had a lot of fun reading it and I'm sure the others too!:D Keep up thegreat work!

☆A- 85%-100%- I can read your fic over and over again and I still would't be sick of it. In fact I WANT MORE!!!!! Absolutely adored it~:D

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~~~~~~☺Citeria/Rubrics☺~~~~~~

♪Opening

●Title-/5

●Poster+Background- /5

●Description+Foreword- /10

>>Total: /20<<

♪Contents

●Creativity/ Originality- /10

●Plot- /20

●Chapter Titles(if applied)- /5

●Flow- /10

>>Total: /45<<

♪Expression

●Characterisation -/15

●Writing Style- /10

●Mechanics(Grammar, Spelling etc)- /10

>>Total: /35<<

☆Total: /100☆

Bonus- /5

(((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))(((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))(((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))(((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))

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