☀ l e m o n swirls → reviews!

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Thursday, April 7, 2011 @ 7:07 AM

HEY PEOPLE! :D alright, so i'm thousandloveletters (or tiffany, if you'd like) here, and i'm your new reviewer here at lemonswirls! :D i'm so happy that i got accepted and yadayada!
I'll be honest with your reviews and try not to be harsh! But I'm overall pretty friendly and nice and kind ~~and all the good things you can think of~~ so no worries i won't exactly be harsh! :D

ALRIGHT, enough of that, let's get down to business! :D Here's my rubric:

Title: 5
Basically i'm looking for creativity and originality in your titles, whether or not it can relate to the story, can it attract the reader (this is pretty important) and yep that's about all. ^^

Description/Foreword: 10
Your description should enthral the readers and fascinate them with the details in your story. A powerful description is an addictive one which will lock the readers' attention.

Character introduction will also count in this part!

Graphic/Poster: 5
Basically.. Just whether or not your poster fits the story's genre, and if it's eye-catching. If I totally fell in love with the poster, then full marks for you! :D

Plot: 15
For this, I'll judge on whether or not your plot is cliche, the development of the story, characterization and stuff like that. :D

Flow: 5
This will be judged based on the speed and process of the story (is it too fast or too slow?), did it make sense?

Vocab/Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling: 15
Just by looking at the title, you can tell what this is gonna be about. :D (i can understand if english isn't your first language though).

Ending: 15
Your ending should wrap up the story and leave the reader feeling satisfied. It should also make a deep impression and not feel rushed.

Format: /10
This actually depends on the way you write your story - did it make me want to sleep? or did it make me feel very excited?

Writing Style: 20
Basically just how you wrote the story, did you use so much bright font colours it hurt my eyes? or was it the opposite way?

Total: 100

Aaaand, just a little breakdown:
80-100 marks - So awesome I can't describe it! You should totally go write a book! :D
60-79 marks - Your story rocks too so keep it up!
40-59 - There's room for improvement, but don't be disheartened! You'll soon make it into the 60-79 range.
20-49 - Lots of room for improvement, so hwaiting!
0-29 - You really need to work hard!

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