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Tuesday, January 18, 2011 @ 7:58 PM

Hey there!!~ It's Maria here...^^
I'm not sure if i should be doing this but it might come in handy when i do your review...:D
I'll post up my criteria and before you request for a review i suggest you look over it and see what i am looking for.
The ranking is...

0-20%= Needs more work and maybe consider re-doing.
21-40%= Adequete but there is lots of room for improvement.
41-60%= It's pretty decent but needs more work.
61-80%= It's intersting and readable
81-100%= Excellent. Something i would read again.

Just to warn people i am honest when it comes to reviewing and sometimes i do not look at the author who wrote the story so i'm not very biased...:D
i reviewed my friend's stories and even though we're friends, i still gave her honest feedback...><
Don't hesitate to ask for a review okay..??...:D
I don't bite ~~i squish people with love.~~
Okay so here is my criteria...>:P

Title: /5

-Is attractive/gives attention

-Grips you into the story.

-understandable

-got to do something about the story

-clean

Description: /10

-clear and easy to understand.

-right to the point.

-has something to do with the story.

-grips you into the story

-fun/exciting

Forward: /10

-clear and easy to understand

-grips you into the story.

-clean

-has something to do with the story.

-exciting

Graphics/pictures: /10

-clean

-mood has something to do with the story.

-character pictures relate to the character’s appearance/personality.

Character descriptions (only if have one): /10

-is easy to understand

-the story reflects on the character

-the way they talk and actions is similar to their character

-has the right informations eg….name, age, DOB.

Author’s note: /5

-is crisp and motivating.

-not biased and not really caring

-talks with the readers, not to the story.

Plot: /35

-intersting

-grips your attention.

-easy to understand

-has a meaning

-clean…not scattered everywhere.

Writing: /35

-is clear and easy to understand

-has something to do with the plot.

-not too rushed or dragged

-gripping

-makes sense

Spelling/grammar: /30

-correct spelling

-correct terms and past tense/present tense

-correct grammar and punctuations

-not abusing the power of symbols

-interesting/different words

Chapter titles (only if have titles): /10

-interesting…has something to do about the chapter

-gripping

Ending (only if completed): /20

-ended off cleanly

-ending makes sense

-not clichéd too much

-not boring

Rated scenes (only if rated): /10

-interesting

-easy to understand

-not scattered/clean

-makes sense

-grips you on.

Format: /10

-clean

-easy to read

-clear

Total: /200

So...that's my criteria...^^

I hope it's not too confusing...:D

P.S...I don't give alot of 100% because there is always some things that need improvement...:D

But if you do get 100%, probably means your an author...:D

Depending on your story, i will not mark the stuff you don't need and the totla might always change (that is why i use percentages)...:D

REQUEST FOR ONE GOGOGO..!!~...XDXD

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